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  • blowhyoooge
    Member
    • May 2016
    • 97

    two new stories!

    looks like literotica posted both of my new stories!

    first: balloonville part 4, in which jeff takes a room at the balloonville bed and breakfast, and gets the most remarkable demonstration of lungpower he's ever seen! (but just who was it who blew up that nice big q24 in the corner? we'll find out in another chapter...)



    next, chapter four in the balloon factory series. here we meet marketing manager melanie, and found out how she became such an amazing balloon blower. it's a bit of a darker story than the others, with a man who manipulater her into blowing balloons... but in the end, she dealt a big "blow" to his ego!



    enjoy!
  • Harley
    Senior Member
    • Jan 2016
    • 269

    #2
    Re: two new stories!

    Nice work! Good to see other ongoing series too - keep it up!

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    • b0f0s0f
      Senior Member
      • Nov 2016
      • 296

      #3
      Re: two new stories!

      I love the way that Jeff is in total disbelief at the whole town. I could imagine a similar story where the guy just went along with everything no questions asked, but I think your twist makes it way better. Jeff's utter confusion and surprise at every crazy thing that happens is exactly how I'd feel in that situation and it makes it all the more enjoyable to read. I legitimately laughed out loud at the line "don't tell my boss I used the F-word" after all that had just happened. Great stuff!

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      • Bobberloon
        Junior Member
        • Feb 2016
        • 16

        #4
        Re: two new stories!

        Loving these stories! Thank you so much!

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        • Bubble Boy :-P

          #5
          Re: two new stories!

          You are very, VERY talented, blowhyoooge
          You write with the stuff of dreams!

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          • BYGavia
            Senior Member
            • Dec 2017
            • 246

            #6
            Re: two new stories!

            Originally posted by blowhyoooge
            ... (but just who was it who blew up that nice big q24 in the corner? we'll find out in another chapter...) ...
            So I don't know why, but reading this teaser without any knowledge of your series, I imagined this old, wizardly character standing in the corner, clutching the nozzle of a fully necked crystal Q24. Probably 'cause the Q24 is merely the stuff of legends nowadays. :-( Still, I thought my mental picture was pretty funny.
            Last edited by BYGavia; 29-12-2017, 22:05. Reason: To clarify that he's a wizard and not just old

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            • Bobberloon
              Junior Member
              • Feb 2016
              • 16

              #7
              Re: two new stories!

              I swear I keep checking your page like 3 times a week to see if there's a new part to the story yet...

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              • loonlover817
                Senior Member
                • Feb 2018
                • 146

                #8
                Re: two new stories!

                I know your stories are really cool and nice
                lover your loons forever

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                • Blustrkuk86
                  Senior Member
                  • Jun 2015
                  • 146

                  #9
                  Re: two new stories!

                  how is the story going? dying to know what happens next

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