A day in the life of

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  • DIABOLOD
    Junior Member
    • Apr 2017
    • 19

    A day in the life of

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    Last edited by DIABOLOD; 28-01-2019, 15:47.
  • Meililoon
    aka lyckr
    • Sep 2014
    • 700

    #2
    Re: A day in the life of

    Very exciting! I love it when the mix of fear and lust is mixed like that, especially when you have a character teasing another and you got that part done really well.
    Just use more line breaks next time please. It was a bit difficult to follow the text with such huge paragraphs

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    • Dust of the Saturn
      Stretched like space-time
      • Feb 2018
      • 299

      #3
      Re: A day in the life of

      WONDERFULL. looks and feels very real. Very original too.
      And I ask myself, why? and all I hear is the cold, dead silence of the cosmos.

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