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A day in the life of
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Re: A day in the life of
Very exciting! I love it when the mix of fear and lust is mixed like that, especially when you have a character teasing another and you got that part done really well.
Just use more line breaks next time please. It was a bit difficult to follow the text with such huge paragraphs -
Re: A day in the life of
WONDERFULL. looks and feels very real. Very original too.And I ask myself, why? and all I hear is the cold, dead silence of the cosmos.Comment
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