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  • blowhyoooge
    Member
    • May 2016
    • 97

    new story!

    part five of the balloonville series is ready! What happened to that balloon that Jeff came all over? Janice is about to show him...



    enjoy!
  • Bubble Boy :-P

    #2
    Re: new story!

    I nearly jizzed myself at the end of the chapter Excellent & effective story telling...it reads very well

    Six foot cloud busters blown to pop?! Those maids must have some power lungs,lol! Hella awesome! I'm hooked on this story! I can't wait to see what's in store for Jeff next!!!!

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    • blowhyoooge
      Member
      • May 2016
      • 97

      #3
      Re: new story!

      thanks! i always like to know what people like the best so i can incorporate more into future chapters.

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      • balloonrider
        Member
        • Jan 2017
        • 63

        #4
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        Thank you for a great story, I love the balloonville story. I would do like Jeff, jizz my pants. I would love to see Jeff caught in the act by one of the balloon blowing goddesses while he is humping a loon. And then see how it plays out

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        • Bubblyzzz
          Senior Member
          • Jul 2017
          • 266

          #5
          Re: new story!

          Fun! It's great to read your stories!

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          • blowhyoooge
            Member
            • May 2016
            • 97

            #6
            Re: new story!

            Originally posted by balloonrider
            . I would love to see Jeff caught in the act by one of the balloon blowing goddesses while he is humping a loon. And then see how it plays out
            that's a good idea, balloonrider. what would you want to happen if you were jeff and you got caught humping a balloon?

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            • Sueco
              Junior Member
              • Jan 2018
              • 10

              #7
              Re: new story!

              Really great stories. Read all stories and will probably read them again soon!

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              • Bobberloon
                Junior Member
                • Feb 2016
                • 16

                #8
                Re: new story!

                My wife is probably wondering why I'm so horned up recently... Great stories!

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                • balloonrider
                  Member
                  • Jan 2017
                  • 63

                  #9
                  Re: new story!

                  I think a scenery where there is a knock on the door, and a one of the girls in the bed and breakfast is turning up to do a turn down service of the room. Which would involve blowing up several big balloons. She would then turn to Jeff and look at his loon and say you like riding them don’t you, then she would ask him to get on top of a gl 500 and blow it up super tight, and just as he shoots his load it burst with a massive bang

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                  • blowhyoooge
                    Member
                    • May 2016
                    • 97

                    #10
                    Re: new story!

                    great idea @balloonrider! i have some gl action (actually gl1200) planned for a later chapter, but i did a quick outline in which someone walks in on jeff when he is humping a balloon. it'll probably be suzette, the mattress-blowing babe, because great things always seem to happen to jeff when she shows up! funny you should mention what happens during turn down service... did you break into my house and read ahead? lol! you'll learn about turn-down service at the balloonville b&b in chapter 7

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                    • blowhyoooge
                      Member
                      • May 2016
                      • 97

                      #11
                      Re: new story!

                      Originally posted by Bobberloon
                      My wife is probably wondering why I'm so horned up recently... Great stories!
                      MISSION ACCOMPLISHED!!! lol

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                      • Hans31
                        Junior Member
                        • Oct 2015
                        • 25

                        #12
                        Re: new story!

                        just read the balloonville stories, and got a couple remarks:

                        1. Amazing story/writing easy to read
                        2.instand boner when imagining this happening to myself
                        3. wishing this would be a real town and close to me
                        4. need daily new chapters haha
                        5. Loved it!

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                        • b0f0s0f
                          Senior Member
                          • Nov 2016
                          • 296

                          #13
                          Re: new story!

                          Originally posted by Hans31
                          2.instand boner when imagining this happening to myself
                          Yeah my favorite part about it is that Jeff's reactions make the story very believable and relatable.

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                          • balloonrider
                            Member
                            • Jan 2017
                            • 63

                            #14
                            Re: new story!

                            @blowhyooge - "did you break into my house and read ahead?" so funny I cant wait for the next chapters to come, you have great writing skills. So I wait with excitement for the turn down service in chapter 7 - I always love hotels that have a decent turn down service

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                            • blowhyoooge
                              Member
                              • May 2016
                              • 97

                              #15
                              Re: new story!

                              sorry guys chapter 6 just keeps getting longer and longer (and it sounds like that's happening to some of you as well

                              what can i say, jeff keeps stumbling into all these balloon-blowing ladies as he makes his way through the story!

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