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This is only the introduction to what hopefully becomes a much larger piece of work. Figured the story would need to start off with a bang, if you know what I mean

Please let me know what you think, I love helpful criticism. I've already completed a full chapter that builds on the intro, but it's going slow. I don't have much time to actually work on it.

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Created a DA account just to read it. Certainly made my Monday morning more interesting Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it
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Wow dude, that was really well written.
Please share more, I love love to read more of your awesome content.
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Thank you! I actually have 6 more currently written that follow the main character's storyline. I'm planning on releasing them all together as one big collection of short stories once I'm happy with them.
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Awesome news Carlos!
Can I be your proof reader for these?
I'm looking forward to more of those stories.
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Sure! I'll send them to you before publishing them on Deviant Art
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Looking forward to it
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Hey Carlos,
I sent you a PM, shoot me an e-mail when you get the chance.
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Post here when you release them, I'd love to read them!
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