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  • Meililoon
    aka lyckr
    • Sep 2014
    • 700

    Finally finished a story

    *Fidgets nervously*
    I finally managed to finish a chapter of the story I've been working on for a long time now.

    I hope you guys like it.
  • Meililoon
    aka lyckr
    • Sep 2014
    • 700

    #2
    Re: Finally finished a story

    Chapter 3 is now out: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...-Day-576396508

    I'm hoping to finish chapter 4 very soon as well

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    • perchedontheloon
      Member
      • Dec 2014
      • 63

      #3
      Re: Finally finished a story

      Been loving this story! Chapter 3 was easily my most favorite part thus far, I really like the characters and the direction you've set up very a delight to read. Please continue!

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      • Meililoon
        aka lyckr
        • Sep 2014
        • 700

        #4
        Re: Finally finished a story

        Thanks a lot! It's much thanks to you (and cgrocarlos) that I got the inspiration to try this out

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        • Banzure
          Inflater of Dolls
          • Feb 2013
          • 257

          #5
          Re: Finally finished a story

          Not exactly my kink, but still very nicely written, a few lightyears beyond what I've done, keep up the good work
          Bigger is good, but burst is better!

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          • cgrocarlos
            Senior Member
            • Oct 2011
            • 140

            #6
            Re: Finally finished a story

            Originally posted by lyckr
            Thanks a lot! It's much thanks to you (and cgrocarlos) that I got the inspiration to try this out
            Glad I could be of some inspiration! Your stories have been great so far, keep it up! I've been working on some new ones for a really really long time but I've been really lazy too. Maybe I'll add some this December.

            We should collectively make a good site like that old one by Chipple with tons and tons of balloon stories.

            In case you or anyone else doesn't know what I'm referring to: http://web.archive.org/web/200212071...loons/stories/

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            • Meililoon
              aka lyckr
              • Sep 2014
              • 700

              #7
              Re: Finally finished a story

              I think I have all the old Chipple stories in a pdf file somewhere Some of them are really great. I also have a bunch of stories that were submitted to a story-writing competition on a different forum many years ago.
              A site dedicated to this sort of stuff would be cool.

              Anyway, here's chapter 4: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rank-577272254
              Finished this a month ago, so I just did some small changes here and there. Please tell me if you spot any obvious spelling errors or other things that seems strange that I might have missed. I can't stand reading my own stuff, so I'm just trusting the spellcheck

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              • perchedontheloon
                Member
                • Dec 2014
                • 63

                #8
                Re: Finally finished a story

                Wanted to give you the shout out, your series that you've been writing is fantastic! It's really on point, looking forward to reading more!

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                • Meililoon
                  aka lyckr
                  • Sep 2014
                  • 700

                  #9
                  Re: Finally finished a story

                  Just finished the first of potentially three parts of chapter 5: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rt-I-592682072
                  It's a little on the dark side I guess, but hopefully you'll still enjoy it. And don't worry, the rest of the chapter is going to be more cheerful If you like the somewhat darker setting though, I might have some ideas for some future chapters

                  Also check out this other short story I wrote a little while ago: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Lisa-s-Loons-591462334
                  Hope you like it!

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                  • Meililoon
                    aka lyckr
                    • Sep 2014
                    • 700

                    #10
                    Re: Finally finished a story

                    Just finished the last part of chapter 5.
                    Part 2: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...t-II-595082496
                    Part 3: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...-III-598771652

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                    • SitpoppingLoons14
                      Extreme Sit-popper
                      • Mar 2016
                      • 111

                      #11
                      Re: Finally finished a story

                      I'm loving this story! Picturing everything in my mind was literally a "blast"! Would be nice if I was on a balloon though.
                      You never know when it's gonna pop!

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                      • Meililoon
                        aka lyckr
                        • Sep 2014
                        • 700

                        #12
                        Re: Finally finished a story

                        I finally did something again! http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Chap...rt-I-647903877
                        I was kind of inspired by perchedontheloon's latest project, as I couldn't come up with anything I was happy with for the next bit. So if you have any suggestions for what happens next, feel free to post them on DA, in this thread or send me a PM. The more suggestions I get, the better. Of course I can't promise that YOUR suggestion will end up in the story, but I'll consider everything that I read.

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                        • fred123
                          Junior Member
                          • Apr 2015
                          • 4

                          #13
                          Re: Finally finished a story

                          The best read I have done in a long time, and I am and lecturer. You are a very good writer!

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                          • Meililoon
                            aka lyckr
                            • Sep 2014
                            • 700

                            #14
                            Re: Finally finished a story

                            Thank you

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                            • Meililoon
                              aka lyckr
                              • Sep 2014
                              • 700

                              #15
                              Re: Finally finished a story

                              Posted a new short story: http://lyckr.deviantart.com/art/Lisa...ns-2-689092151

                              Still trying to figure out what to do with my main story

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