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Old 07-01-2019, 02:55 PM
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Old 07-01-2019, 10:21 PM
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Very exciting! I love it when the mix of fear and lust is mixed like that, especially when you have a character teasing another and you got that part done really well.
Just use more line breaks next time please. It was a bit difficult to follow the text with such huge paragraphs
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WONDERFULL. looks and feels very real. Very original too.
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