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Old 19-01-2015, 01:12 AM
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so, I wrote a story and uploaded it to deviant art. Hope you all enjoy it.
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Nicely written, good details, but I assume it's only the beginning?
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Old 19-01-2015, 10:06 PM
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Yup, it's only part one
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That's a cool story. If only......
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If only what?
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I think it is pretty excellent!
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Thanks!
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Old 15-02-2015, 03:54 AM
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I've uploaded a few other parts, up to part 4 (which is accidentally labeled as 3)
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